Diary Of A Butterfly
Synopsis:
Bhaggyashri Production and Prince Movies’ It (A) is the story of an ambitious girl who would do anything to climb the ladder of success in her profession as a fashion designer.
Gul (Udita Goswami) comes from Jaipur to Bombay to pursure her dream of fashion designing. She joins the company of Vivek (Harsh Chhaya) to whom she soon complains about Adi (Ronny Jhutti), her senior who seeks sexual favours from her for okaying her designs. This is her way of getting back at Adi with whom she had to sleep. She soon becomes Vivek’s blue-eyed employee and is promoted, but stabs him in the back when she gets a far more lucrative job offer from his competitor, Ravi Bajaj (Aryan Vaid). Before long, she ditches Ravi Bajaj too to join Xavier (Rajesh Khattar).
Gul’s mother, Shobha (Rati Agnihotri), always reminds Gul to maintain a diary, jotting down the day’s happen- ings in it as she feels, it would serve as a mirror of her life. Gul obliges but she soon tires of writing the diary. This is because of her own moves in life and also because she feels terribly let down by Karan (Rajeev Singh), her boyfriend in Jaipur, and her two friends in Bombay, Carol (Sofia Hayat) and Pia (Sneha Belani).
There is a specific kind of sound a high-end fountain pen makes when it scratches across heavy cotton paper that director Vinod Lakhani clearly wanted us to feel emotionally connected to, yet the sound effect keeps missing its mark by a couple of frames. That sort of editorial laziness sets the tone early. We are asked to swallow a lot of mood lighting before the plot even remembers to put its shoes on. If I'm honest, the opening twenty minutes feel less like an invitation into a narrative and more like an endurance test designed to see who brought their phone charger.
Udita Goswami plays a corporate climber whose life unravels when she gets caught up in a murder investigation she didn't ask for. She spends a lot of time staring blankly out of rain-streaked office windows while soft piano chords bleed into the soundtrack. It is a performance that relies heavily on silk blouses and heavy eyeliner to do the emotional lifting. When she is required to look distressed, she drops her jaw just enough for the studio lights to catch her gloss. Rajiv Singh shares the screen as the man hovering on the periphery of her crumbling sanity, bringing an energy that could best be described as aggressively wheezed. They share scenes with the chemistry of two people waiting for a bus that is twenty minutes late and already raining.
The supporting cast drifts in and out of the frame like ghosts who forgot why they were haunting the building. Sofia Hayat pops up to smolder at the camera and deliver English dialogue with the rigid cadence of someone reading warranty terms off a toaster. Then Aryan Vaid shows up in a suit that is two sizes too large, sweating through his close-ups while Rajesh Khattar tries desperately to rescue his lines from the flat, lifeless room tone. It reminds me of the pacing problems that plagued Aks, where the actors seemed to be acting in three entirely different rooms rather than the same physical space. Rati Agnihotri does what she can with a motherly role written entirely in exclamation points and sighs. Nassar Abdulla and Harsh Chhaya bring a bit of gravel to their brief appearances, though they are both undercut by a mixing board that seems to have only two volume settings: loud and quiet.
Cinematographer Jeetu Arora points his lens at everything with an equal amount of glossy indifference. Every hallway looks like it belongs in a corporate brochure for a failing software startup. The color grade is stuck in that late-2000s purgatory where blues are cranked up until human skin looks like skim milk. When the story shifts gears into thriller territory, the camera moves with a jerky handheld motion that feels pasted on in post-production rather than motivated by the characters' actual panic. Then there is a recurring needle-drop that sounds like a midi-file version of an ambient lounge track, playing over every single emotional pivot until you want to throw something at the screen. It's a small thing, but it bugged me every single time it looped back around.
Hindi movies have a long tradition of exploring the moral rot of metropolitan ambition, yet this script treats corruption as a chic aesthetic choice rather than a systemic horror. The protagonist wanders through sleek boardrooms and dimly lit hotel suites as if she is browsing an expensive furniture catalog. The screenplay by Lakhani tries to stitch together a noir mystery using plot threads that snap under the slightest tug of logical scrutiny. Characters make baffling choices because the plot demands they arrive at a rainy parking lot by scene forty. There is zero momentum behind any of it. We get endless reaction shots of people nodding slowly at revelations that were telegraphed thirty minutes earlier.
Ronny Jhutti and Gaurav Dixit wander through the background as corporate flunkies, chewing on toothpicks and looking vaguely concerned whenever someone mentions an offshore account. They are less characters and more walking exposition delivery systems designed to fill gaps between long, lingering reaction shots of Udita Goswami holding a cocktail glass. This is the sort of filmmaking that mistakes mood for substance and soft focus for depth. You watch it happen, you check your watch to see if it's almost over, and then you forget the character names before you even reach the parking lot.
There is an awkwardness to how this film handles its own gravity. It wants so badly to be a sleek neo-noir about betrayal in the modern age, but it lacks the narrative bone structure to hold its own weight. When you strip away the designer clothes and the ambient soundtrack, what is left is a hollow exercise in style over substance. You can throw every glossy trick in the book at a sluggish screenplay, but at some point somebody has to write a scene that actually means something. This picture never finds that gear, choosing instead to drift aimlessly through its own runtime until the projector finally runs out of gas.